Saturday, December 29, 2007

Nilavum Neeyum





Nilavu Vinnil vasikum yendru ninaithirunthen
mannil unnai kaanum varai . . . .


Vennilavin paal vannathil  karuppai irupathu yenna ?
verum kalangama illai unnai kanda kalakkama . . .

Pagalil ulavum unnai sutrave kaalaiyil varugiratho sooriyan ?



2 comments:

King Vishy said...

Lines 3 and 4 - Top Class!!!

Line 5: Cool..

Lines 1 & 2: nursery rhymes madhiri irukku :D but, frankly it sounds a bit familiar.. and familiarity breeds indifference :)

BeeJay said...

@ king Vishy

:D thanks for ur honest comments pal !!
( do u remember the first two lines ? u asked me to tell one during our last TSA visit cab travel . i uploaded the same :) )

yeppadiyo , un blogla naan comment ezhuthina udane bathiluku nyaayama neeyum comment ezhuthina paathiya..
nallavanda nee !!